To be honest, this is the first VN I played that had a short story. But I think it worked really well. Better a short finished story than a big unfinished one. It made me feel emotional towards the end. Even though it’s simple, it still feels meaningful.
SPOILER (click to open)
The main characters relationship transforms them both, and they both push for change, even if they're not sure what comes next. There's no super NSFW scenes, so the romantic moments you do get feel even more charming and meaningful.
The art style is very cute too, I actually enjoyed it a lot, even though I usually don’t pay attention to it that much. All in all, really nice game with a lot of charm!
THIS GAME. ts genuinely changed my perspective on my relationships in my life and made me grow as a person. I love this and everything it will be. Thank you
This only took me 4 hours to read not 5 or 6!! now make a second game that takes 2763 hours to read for compensation!!! Now seriously, this game was awesome, i ACTUALLY kicked my feet in happiness when (spoilers) they kissed, i was so happy, half of the time i was half asleep since i started reading around 10 almost 11 pm to 1 am, but i decided to rest and finished it just some minutes ago. I love the character design and I really want more of them! But uh, yeah that's up to you and the team's choice, wish you luck and a good day, to you and the team who helped make this game.
I have to be up early in the morning for work but it was SO worth it staying up and playing this. Really enjoyed the art style and story, and the relatable "what do I do know" at the end. I need a sequel :D
This game is super incredible. The storyline had its highs and lows, and times I've laughed and cried over this silly lil game. When it ended I can say that this game deserves so much more recognition and love. Good job to all the people who helped made this game!!!<3
Incredible, I've played this for hours and I can say that, it hooks too much is very nice story, a striking art style, and a story that is not noticeable at all flat, Super well done and interesting, for when the second part 🗿🗿??
Utterly amazing, games and movies don't normally get me but this made me well up several times. One of the best VNs I've had the pleasure of experiencing.
Such an amazing game!! I had a lovely time and I loved how the characters' emotions were deeply studied, not only limited to the main plot. It is such a complex, emotive and well-written story! Thank you, Col and Hawky, for bringing such a wonderful project to life!
I love the Artwork and the Story as well, thank u so much for representing this love story so damn well, its really beautiful all around and ill replay this for sure, as a trans masc myself i really appreciate the representation, thanks again :3<3
This is the best visual novel I've ever played! The characters were well crafted, and I was in love with the art style. I genuinely wish it were longer, but I understand that all good things must come to an end.
I finished the game in one day, so engrossed and in love with the story and the characters, that when the credits rolled I even cried because I felt like I was saying goodbye to someone in my family, this story touched me so deeply.
This game is all I’ve been able to think about since I’ve played it, the art and the writing are both amazing. Thank you for creating such a gem of a game.
finally got around to playing through this and man oh man it's great, art style is so cozy and the characters are really well developed!! lots of good things to be said about this vn
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To be honest, this is the first VN I played that had a short story. But I think it worked really well. Better a short finished story than a big unfinished one. It made me feel emotional towards the end. Even though it’s simple, it still feels meaningful.
SPOILER (click to open)
The main characters relationship transforms them both, and they both push for change, even if they're not sure what comes next. There's no super NSFW scenes, so the romantic moments you do get feel even more charming and meaningful.The art style is very cute too, I actually enjoyed it a lot, even though I usually don’t pay attention to it that much. All in all, really nice game with a lot of charm!
no puedo amar mas este juegos es arte y lo amo
THIS GAME. ts genuinely changed my perspective on my relationships in my life and made me grow as a person. I love this and everything it will be. Thank you
I LOVED THIS GAME SO MUCH! This game was awesome and I really enjoyed it!
I LOVE BTOH OF THEM SO MUCH BLESS THEIR HEARTS I HOPE THEY HAVE THE BEST LIFE TOGETHER OH MY GIDEGJEHDBHSEGNYGDFSGHEFGHFDE VD CVXBCMHDVFHJEGHJ
This only took me 4 hours to read not 5 or 6!! now make a second game that takes 2763 hours to read for compensation!!! Now seriously, this game was awesome, i ACTUALLY kicked my feet in happiness when (spoilers) they kissed, i was so happy, half of the time i was half asleep since i started reading around 10 almost 11 pm to 1 am, but i decided to rest and finished it just some minutes ago. I love the character design and I really want more of them! But uh, yeah that's up to you and the team's choice, wish you luck and a good day, to you and the team who helped make this game.
2763 you say… anyways I haven’t read this yet sounds good :D
I have to be up early in the morning for work but it was SO worth it staying up and playing this. Really enjoyed the art style and story, and the relatable "what do I do know" at the end. I need a sequel :D
they are so cute, I have so many ss of them!! loved the storyline the joy I'm feeling atm is immense:))) edit just finished it, crying it's over
this hit me on such a personal level i genuinely cannot explain how much i adored this game
haha gay.
not appropriate
Sooo heckin cute and sweet! Highly recommend! Can't wait to see what these developers do next!
No mobile! 😭😭😭😭
This game is super incredible. The storyline had its highs and lows, and times I've laughed and cried over this silly lil game. When it ended I can say that this game deserves so much more recognition and love. Good job to all the people who helped made this game!!!<3
Incredible, I've played this for hours and I can say that, it hooks too much is very nice story, a striking art style, and a story that is not noticeable at all flat, Super well done and interesting, for when the second part 🗿🗿??
Utterly amazing, games and movies don't normally get me but this made me well up several times. One of the best VNs I've had the pleasure of experiencing.
it won’t let me load this version but I played the Jam version and I loved it! If I could play this version I could, guess I’ll keep trying!
Such an amazing game!! I had a lovely time and I loved how the characters' emotions were deeply studied, not only limited to the main plot. It is such a complex, emotive and well-written story! Thank you, Col and Hawky, for bringing such a wonderful project to life!
Lovely story, would recommend, short and sweet
I love the Artwork and the Story as well, thank u so much for representing this love story so damn well, its really beautiful all around and ill replay this for sure, as a trans masc myself i really appreciate the representation, thanks again :3<3
Such a lovely story and the art was so cool!! was so heartbroken when credits rolled, lol, i wish it was longer <3
I am so happy I actually played this and I wish I can support this project more than enjoying it and commenting on itch io.
aww this is such a cute and wholesome story! i really love the artstyle, its so chunky and fits really well with the whole vibe!
This is the best visual novel I've ever played! The characters were well crafted, and I was in love with the art style. I genuinely wish it were longer, but I understand that all good things must come to an end.
I finished the game in one day, so engrossed and in love with the story and the characters, that when the credits rolled I even cried because I felt like I was saying goodbye to someone in my family, this story touched me so deeply.
Same here, i whish it would be longer or there would be a second part, stoping when the real story begins is brutal lol
This game was so FUCKING GOOD oh my god what an experience, really. I LOVED it
is this game gonna have like a spin off or sequal in any form ever?
OMG i hope so
i need this game to have a big fandom everywhere NOW
Gonna start drawing fanart of those characters, have to see where to get it to the dev thou lmao
Oh how I wish to be a queer outlaw in the desert...
(Love the game btw, actively eating it as we speak :3)
arent humans the only creature that can blush?
its a fiction telltale game.
i'm sure anthropomorphic birds doesn't exist too
The game looks fantastic <3 The art style the characters are made with is so well done!
I noticed that your game has already been translated into some languages. I wonder, would you be interested in the Polish localisation of Lookouts?
luv the character designs :3
Such a creative idea. You nailed it!
I was very immersed in this story, I really liked it! the art style is really good!
Absolutely awesome!!, i love it!
BEST first impression ive ever had on a platform like itch.io. wonderful stuff! 💝
This was absolutely wonderful and so deeply personal on a level I didn't expect. The story was fantastic and the art and music was just amazing too.
What a great gay little game.
Loved the art style, it's easy to see the game was made by people that like what they are doing.
This game is all I’ve been able to think about since I’ve played it, the art and the writing are both amazing. Thank you for creating such a gem of a game.
finally got around to playing through this and man oh man it's great, art style is so cozy and the characters are really well developed!! lots of good things to be said about this vn
i love this game so much. whenever i think about the kinds of games i wanna make this is always the first game that comes to my mind. simply the best.